tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1968065452658450075.post6054172197269078343..comments2020-11-21T16:42:04.132-08:00Comments on Raining Snowflakes : Rules over madnessAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00742348167748199680noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1968065452658450075.post-38307275990931273692014-11-12T07:08:55.152-08:002014-11-12T07:08:55.152-08:00I agree with Katie and Collin--your story is surpr...I agree with Katie and Collin--your story is surprising and sinister and it's so interesting how your narrator remains calm and matches herself to the demon, even surpasses this creature she is supposed to be threatened by. Very creative, Ashley.Hayley Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02065802813330958478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1968065452658450075.post-58236509131180223952014-10-30T06:42:10.910-07:002014-10-30T06:42:10.910-07:00At first I thought this was going to be a scary pa...At first I thought this was going to be a scary paranormal story where the demon possesses you and yadda yadda yadda, but no. I loved how you turned it into a story where you are the scarer and you are able to talk to this demon with confidence. Very well written :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17080445719628188497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1968065452658450075.post-39580335607701463872014-10-30T06:24:32.114-07:002014-10-30T06:24:32.114-07:00It was interesting how you turned a paranormal enc...It was interesting how you turned a paranormal encounter into a conversation. The dialogue between the narrator and the creature were very different. I like your character's sense of empowerment, especially at the end. A quote I really liked is, “In the past three days I had dismembered at least five homeless people and two highly proclaimed business men and all of their eyes were dug up by a spoon and put in a glass jar.." <br />This quote has exceptional imagery, and so does your entire story. Good job!<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05011739151367680712noreply@blogger.com